congratulations Callum - Very well written. You have created a lot of suspense and used very interesting vocabulary. I was also impressed with your punctuation.
WOW, buddy - I didn't know you could write such an interesting story. I honestly was captivated by it! I couldn't stop reading till the very end and now I want to read more - you totally left me in suspense. You had some great ideas and that's because you read such a variety of books which help you, well done!
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You have lots of interesting characters in your story and use dialogue well. Great work Callum!
congratulations Callum - Very well written. You have created a lot of suspense and used very interesting vocabulary. I was also impressed with your punctuation.
WOW, buddy - I didn't know you could write such an interesting story. I honestly was captivated by it! I couldn't stop reading till the very end and now I want to read more - you totally left me in suspense. You had some great ideas and that's because you read such a variety of books which help you, well done!
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