Monday 20 March 2017

I.A.L.T Re-Craft Paragraphs to Make them More Effective



I have been learning to re-craft paragraphs to make them more effective.
I found this easy because I am good at writing.
I found this tricky because I am not to good at writing paragraphs.
I feel good about writing the paragraphs as I enjoyed it.
My next step is to write more paragraphs.

2 comments:

Mummy said...

oooohh ... sounds very exciting ! I can't wait to hear what happens next. Good work with your paragraphs.

Granna said...

Hey Cal I especially like the second paragraph . You have created a sense of suspense - I want to know what happens next. I also love the alliteration of shake and shudder and "big, bad and mean" sounds quite threatening and scary !!!