The Flying Pirate
It was a calm day then he received a radio message.
Oops I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Jack.
Where were we? Aaa yes. He contacted his friend Bubbles.
“Hello friend Bubbles, I have a mission for us”.
The message said SOS...Our... Plane... is...falling…and that’s all we received .
So I went to my flying pirate ship. My craft can fly as high as a bird. Then I saw it. The plane was coming down fast . So he put the craft on auto pilot and ran to the plank. He got his swords, grapple guns and wings and jumped and flew. He landed on the wing and ran to the cockpit. His friend just arrived to help the plane. They figured out what happened. A leak was in the tank so he went back to the ship to grapple the plane and pull it back up to safety.
It was as tricky as finding your way through a maze. Now the two friends have saved the day again.
Callum
5 comments:
WOW, Callum - your Flying Pirate Story was so exciting. It totally made me smile ! Your writing is getting better and better all the time. I really enjoyed listening to you describe your clown picture too - great art work !
I like how you have thought about it
You have used many interesting words to describe your clown and you've included a simile. I like how you have introduced your story. Well done.
Awesome buddy - I liked your story and your forward rolls are coming along nicely!
What amazing progress you have made in your writing Callum. I so enjoyed your story because of the similes and all the interesting detail. Do you really know how to use Speech marks ?
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