Tuesday 20 May 2014

Adding detail


Adding detail means our story can answer the questions who, where, when, what how and why. Detail means there will be more information . It makes the story more interesting. It makes a picture in the reader's head. It can be tricky to add detail.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

I'm looking forward to it too Callum! Hope it's not too cold...

Granna said...

I love the details you give me when you tell me a story and all the details you put in your Lego creations and now you are putting interesting detail in your written stories. Awesome Callum.