It was easy to choose the pictures to put in but it was a bit harder to use my learning intention because I had to think of new startings. I did a good job because I changed some sentences to make them more interesting.
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Mummy
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Well done! It was great reading about your experiments - very interesting.
Good on you for changing your sentence beginnings because it certainly makes it a lot more interesting for your reader. This reader is very impressed. I also love the way your comments are displayed. Awesome work Callum.
2 comments:
Well done! It was great reading about your experiments - very interesting.
Good on you for changing your sentence beginnings because it certainly makes it a lot more interesting for your reader. This reader is very impressed. I also love the way your comments are displayed. Awesome work Callum.
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